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Blissful Black Hair 2

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Greetings of fresh air

We blend as Sinatra's voice

Glimpse eyes attract

Love has centered my voice

She takes me home

Upon the crystal moon

Touches of moist,

Shafting her womb

Miss Blissful Black hair,

Where did one get eyes like that

I tell myself,

She robbed a cat

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The clipped phrases really snap the reader to attention. I like the rhythmic feel. Nicely done!

Eric Lawson
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