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...Sewing needles will
thread in the dark lightning'll
be a stored source green
on the table no need for
stables old a collection

no need for savvy
or to ask a farmer's wife
does she sow parades
of air dancers kenny g
exiled and dogs named erskine

airwaves owned by the e
people, the true meaning of
steeple revealed, no
one leaves on a jet plane, no
need for blame, no laws-no law-

enforcementors, health
food deemed redundant, shelf-life
an oxymoron,
weather's for sailing, who is
ailing, harp seals pandas

potable water,
people needing people the
only people in  the Morlde`,
Barbra unexiled to real-ly sing happy days

are here, again, and
everyone's in a slow dance
expertly in charge
of the Love, every game ends
in a tie, all qualify!

                  H.e.m./H'H.
                  10.16.MMix.
                  (novus vetus universitas) 

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Admin: Will the formatting I intended be initiated for this post? TY, H.e.m/H'H.

HaroHalola
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We've made as many adjustments as we can and think we have it basically correct. Please review it and make changes as necessary. There were a few words that were italicized but we didn't know which ones.
Poems and short stories should be typed...

We've made as many adjustments as we can and think we have it basically correct. Please review it and make changes as necessary. There were a few words that were italicized but we didn't know which ones.
Poems and short stories should be typed directly into the WYSIWYG editor or pasted into notepad and then dropped into the editor. Programs like Microsoft Word use A LOT of coding that search engines can't properly crawl when they search the different websites. And even though the finished product may look ok when pasted into the editor, the editor will many times malfunction when the piece i uploaded to the website because it can't read the code, creating the problems that you had with your poem. If we didn't make our website search engine friendly, then we would never be ranked appropriately with Google, Yahoo, etc.... Thank you for your post and if you need anything else, let us know!

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Joshua Hennen
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Admin: TY for the attention to this Work, you have It near to almost, the penultimate stanza's formatting:

potable water,
people needing people the
only people in
the Morlde`, Barbra unexiled
to real-ly sing happy days


As you can see, the...

Admin: TY for the attention to this Work, you have It near to almost, the penultimate stanza's formatting:

potable water,
people needing people the
only people in
the Morlde`, Barbra unexiled
to real-ly sing happy days


As you can see, the piece is Tanka form, throughout. If you would also indulge the additional italics?

kenny g health food Morlde`(already italicized) H.e.m./H'H. (novus vetus universitas)

TY, I will endeavor to format in the suggested manner for future thread posts. I respect your concern re: vying in consistency with the other mentioned sites, & am pleased to be associated with the high standards of this one.

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HaroHalola
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Admin: TY for the requested corrections, redolent of a class act!

HaroHalola
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