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Curse of Mother Nature

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By Mother Nature She was cursed to the ground;
And by all the creatures She was Crowned –
To become the home for those She destroyed;
And killing a life They once enjoyed.
Of the earth and never to depart –
She will never again have a mortal heart.

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Very mythical...cursed and then crowned...I like that. I'm not sure what this is referring to, as you make your reader guess who She is. It sounds like some feminine aspect of environmental degradation...but I'm not sure.

I like it though. ...

Very mythical...cursed and then crowned...I like that. I'm not sure what this is referring to, as you make your reader guess who She is. It sounds like some feminine aspect of environmental degradation...but I'm not sure.

I like it though. Good Job!

Lisa

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Thanks.I saw a twisted tree that reminded me of a woman....and it looked sad

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