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castlecards and sandhouse of pet rock

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in this cause i cannot define the wasted space and up keep of time/ sand castle/ would not believe i any one gift just take it and leave begin to sift /house of cards/ all of this scribbled nonsense reminds me of when it was all a cinch /pet rock/ seen it all comming in my brain took this for closesure and began again 2/7/09                                                                                                                     

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While I am not a fan personally of the structure, I really like the poem itself.....how the sidebars come in and out of the stream of consciousness.

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