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Quintessence

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I quench
the thirst of
my ear against
your chest

to tongue the
meter of
your heartbeat;

the fever in
your exhalant
and
my inhalant
inscribes the

the knot of our r
quintessence.

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A passionate poem. Short, concise, yet deeply felt. The images snake around the language toward the conclusion quite well. Very good.

Brandon_Hennen
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That's beautiful, and I couldn't have said it better myself Brandon.

Bella_Lea
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