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The Cleavage of a Peach

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it's fascinating...

by hand a plane of rupture

...so smoothly induced


-A.D. 2006 6

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I have never been a fan of haiku in English because the form seems far too cramped for our lexicon. But the addition of the picture allows the meaning of the haiku to come to the surface and in this case, the sparsity of words is more effective...

I have never been a fan of haiku in English because the form seems far too cramped for our lexicon. But the addition of the picture allows the meaning of the haiku to come to the surface and in this case, the sparsity of words is more effective than if you had more. So OK, maybe I like Haiku if it has a picture!

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Thank you very much! I am glad mine was enjoyable to you. :-)
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