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Dazed

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I’ve been broken hurt beaten and abused
This chaotic life has got me so confused
I’m trying to turn my life around
Can’t seem to plant both feet on the ground
I take one step forward and two steps back
Keep losing my focus and falling off track
I’ve been in a few wreaks and collisions
Made some mistakes and bad decisions
I don’t know what has gotten into me
Somehow I have become my own worst enemy
I’m driving down this dark road with one headlight
Wanna pull over, but I gotta make it through this night

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Your poetry is definitely improving, ynggdss. I especially like the single headlight of a car comparison. I wonder what your work would be like if you didn't rhyme. I like structured poetry generally but I feel that you might be held back by it.

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Thank you. I just started writing so I'll take your advice and give it a shot.

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This poem made me tummy hurt

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